Mijena15's graphic (updated)

I didn't really like the graphic so I tried to fix it up a bit. The changes are not huge, but it's still better than the previous one.
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As you can see, some of the hair has been removed (I used the outline from I-Dressup, but the hair shape looked wrong in this pose), and I've outlined the top so it looks more realistic and added more shading on the shoes. You can't really see it, but I'm afraid to overdo something. Oh, and the skirt has been edited a little bit. Can you see it?

What do you think, should I work more on it?

-Maria/mgirl07